This story was written by Henry. This has not been fixed up by the teacher only conferenced at conferencing time. Please leave any feedback about what you like about the story or things I could work on.
Alex!!!
Last
year Alex and I met by playing in the sand pit everyday until I asked him “can
you help me with my giant hole” and Alex shouted yes! Soon we stated the giant
hole and then I remembered we were in the same class. Suddenly the bell rang so
we talked about Minecraft walking back to class .Minecraft is a world out of
blocks. We
need each other to talk about Minecraft and to build cars out of sand for fun.
We also need each other for building houses on Minecraft by him I got an idea
to have a crossbow war on
Minecraft He
is important so he can tell me
updates ,how to get stuff and how to build stuff on minecraft He is also important So I have a friend when I am
older. Alex looks really cool. He has hair brown hair and likes to be called
mini man because he thinks it sounds cool I
feel really relaxed when we play together.
you made some mistakes maybe you should re read next time.
ReplyDeleteKayla
I lIKE MINECRAFT and good writing henry
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