Starring Hobo Joe, Steve, Rat King, and maybe Liam Neeson
TAKEN 3
Warning this may not be as
exciting as you thought it might be.
Somewhere in a junkyard a
dirty, stinky junkyard there lived a stinky but cheerful man called Hobo Joe he
had a dog called Steve, he was friendly and had scruffy grey fur and always
loves to lye on Joe’s bed. They lived in a nice trash house mostly made of
rusty car parts and rubbish bins.
Now in the middle of the junkyard
there is a tunnel beside it is a fifty metre deep slope and a giant vertical
version of a flame-thrower that is used to destroy trash when the junkyard is
full. Okay, now down the tunnel it’s really long and for a while it’s darkness
then there is a humongous kingdom full of evil rats which are loyal to their
also evil Rat King.
One day Hobo Joe woke up and
Steve wasn’t on his bed. “Weird,” he said to himself. He looked around, his
house was messier than three whole dumps put together which wasn’t normal, some
thing caught his eye there was a scratch mark on the door that read, ‘help!’
He knew straight away that
the rats had taken Steve for food, he grabbed a flashlight turned it on and
sprinted towards the tunnel and dived down which caused him to slide. He was
sliding for quite a while then he saw a light, he was going really fast now.
There were bone like bars at the end of the tunnel, “what is that? Oh it’s a
cage,” he muttered. “Wait I can see Steve!”
Bang Hobo Joe smashed through
the cage bars, and grabbed Steve. He was going so fast he was flying over the
kingdom. “Steve I’m flying.” Joe said gleefully, Steve was ignoring his not so
funny joke. They went up a tunnel on the other side and landed perfectly.
Someone came up behind them, “hi,” he said. “I’m Liam Neeson, I’m here for the
movie.”
“Oh.” Said Steve, “you missed
it.”
“You can talk?” Asked Hobo
Joe.
I loved how you described the junkyard. I think you sould become a famous book writer. From Deanna
ReplyDeleteI like how you put Liam Neeson in it.
ReplyDeleteJordan
wow i loved that story one day you could be famous
ReplyDeletecarla :-)