Sunday 26 May 2013

TAKEN 3 - By Daniel Hughes

This story is the sole work of Daniel Hughes, room 15.
Starring Hobo Joe, Steve, Rat King, and maybe Liam Neeson 

TAKEN 3 
 
Warning this may not be as exciting as you thought it might be.
Somewhere in a junkyard a dirty, stinky junkyard there lived a stinky but cheerful man called Hobo Joe he had a dog called Steve, he was friendly and had scruffy grey fur and always loves to lye on Joe’s bed. They lived in a nice trash house mostly made of rusty car parts and rubbish bins.

Now in the middle of the junkyard there is a tunnel beside it is a fifty metre deep slope and a giant vertical version of a flame-thrower that is used to destroy trash when the junkyard is full. Okay, now down the tunnel it’s really long and for a while it’s darkness then there is a humongous kingdom full of evil rats which are loyal to their also evil Rat King.

One day Hobo Joe woke up and Steve wasn’t on his bed. “Weird,” he said to himself. He looked around, his house was messier than three whole dumps put together which wasn’t normal, some thing caught his eye there was a scratch mark on the door that read, ‘help!’

He knew straight away that the rats had taken Steve for food, he grabbed a flashlight turned it on and sprinted towards the tunnel and dived down which caused him to slide. He was sliding for quite a while then he saw a light, he was going really fast now. There were bone like bars at the end of the tunnel, “what is that? Oh it’s a cage,” he muttered. “Wait I can see Steve!”

Bang Hobo Joe smashed through the cage bars, and grabbed Steve. He was going so fast he was flying over the kingdom. “Steve I’m flying.” Joe said gleefully, Steve was ignoring his not so funny joke. They went up a tunnel on the other side and landed perfectly. Someone came up behind them, “hi,” he said. “I’m Liam Neeson, I’m here for the movie.”
“Oh.” Said Steve, “you missed it.”
“You can talk?” Asked Hobo Joe.
 

3 comments:

  1. I loved how you described the junkyard. I think you sould become a famous book writer. From Deanna

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  2. I like how you put Liam Neeson in it.

    Jordan

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  3. wow i loved that story one day you could be famous

    carla :-)

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