Tuesday 4 June 2013

TOM CAT FINDS A NEW HOME - By Samantha

This is the sole work of Samantha, Room 15.

A big, fat round cat walked silently through his cat flap. This cat was so fat he looked just like a grey, black and white stripy ball. He walked across the road to a tall, old, wooden fence painted yellow, he squeezed through a broken piece of wood. The rather small fat boy Harry, He was wearing his dirty orange t-shirt with black shorts that went down to his knees and his old muddy sneakers. He stood out side aiming to kick the football. Tom cat knew that Harry was a great football kicker. Harry had hit the football so hard it had gone round the side of their new house. The house was decorated with blue and white paint. Harry raced round the side. Tom cat followed along just about touching Harry’s heels. Harry had found his ball and quickly turned and kicked it back. ”BANG”. The ball hit tom cat and made him go flying into the air. “THUMP”
He landed face first in the mud puddle. Tom cat strolled away meowing “I hate my neighbourhood.”

He began leading himself across the road avoiding traffic. Tom cat scratched at the door then walked once again silently walked through the cat flap. Something felt different he just didn’t understand nothing ever felt different before. Tom cat sat down and thought for a moment. “Ah-ha “ meowed Tom cat. He saw a small brown thing out of the corner of his eye. It was the grossest thing in the world of cats. It was a puppy! The puppy came running towards him. The beastly creature slid out his long, pink and licked right up the side of Tom cats face. Tom cat ran out the room and through the cat flap, he ran through the towns across the city in the buildings and over the hills. He ran as fast as he could into an old woman’s house. “I am lost and scared what to do, what to do? Meowed Tom cat. “Maybe I can just stay here for a few days. He slept under an old wooden bed, the wall was surrounded by pictures of puppies those small, beastly creatures. But soon enough he set out into the big dangerous world again and found his favourite family and his favourite cat flap. Finally he settled back in and quickly that was because they had got rid of that mean creature, the puppy!

2 comments:

  1. I wouldn't want to be fat like tom cat! Maybe you could add in paragraphs?

    Jemma

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  2. Caitlin and Noah 5GA24 June 2013 at 07:04

    In would hate to be as fat as Tom although they are quite cute. I really liked your story about him. I would like to see and read more about it.

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