A big, fat round cat walked silently through his cat flap. This cat was so fat he looked just like a grey, black and white stripy ball. He walked across the road to a tall, old, wooden fence painted yellow, he squeezed through a broken piece of wood. The rather small fat boy Harry, He was wearing his dirty orange t-shirt with black shorts that went down to his knees and his old muddy sneakers. He stood out side aiming to kick the football. Tom cat knew that Harry was a great football kicker. Harry had hit the football so hard it had gone round the side of their new house. The house was decorated with blue and white paint. Harry raced round the side. Tom cat followed along just about touching Harry’s heels. Harry had found his ball and quickly turned and kicked it back. ”BANG”. The ball hit tom cat and made him go flying into the air. “THUMP”
He landed face
first in the mud puddle. Tom cat strolled away meowing “I hate my
neighbourhood.”
He began leading
himself across the road avoiding traffic. Tom cat scratched at the door then
walked once again silently walked through the cat flap. Something felt
different he just didn’t understand nothing ever felt different before. Tom cat
sat down and thought for a moment. “Ah-ha “ meowed Tom cat. He saw a small
brown thing out of the corner of his eye. It was the grossest thing in the
world of cats. It was a puppy! The puppy came running towards him. The beastly
creature slid out his long, pink and licked right up the side of Tom cats face.
Tom cat ran out the room and through the cat flap, he ran through the towns
across the city in the buildings and over the hills. He ran as fast as he could
into an old woman’s house. “I am lost and scared what to do, what to do? Meowed
Tom cat. “Maybe I can just stay here for a few days. He slept under an old
wooden bed, the wall was surrounded by pictures of puppies those small, beastly
creatures. But soon enough he set out into the big dangerous world again and
found his favourite family and his favourite cat flap. Finally he settled back
in and quickly that was because they had got rid of that mean creature, the
puppy!
I wouldn't want to be fat like tom cat! Maybe you could add in paragraphs?
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In would hate to be as fat as Tom although they are quite cute. I really liked your story about him. I would like to see and read more about it.
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