My heart was pounding in my
ears and I was gasping for breath when suddenly…I got saved from drowning the
lifeguard asked if I was ok I said yes but I did swallow a lot of water. I
decided to stay in the shallow part Moana pool. I spotted a board and the more
I got closer the further it got finaly I caught it I jumped on the board and I
was happy until…the waves came. The waves pushed me off the board. The board
had led me to the very deep bit of the pool I tried to scream for help. I
thought for a secend I put one hand up a lifeguard saw me he grabbed his stick
and he pulled me out of the pool. Thankyou so much I said. Maybe I should get
out now and go in the much more shallow part of Moana pool.
Mackenzie I hope that it was only a story!
ReplyDeleteLoved the emotions you showed!
Hugs Ruth
Albert Pye Primary
ReplyDeleteWow, well done Mackenzie that is a great story. It is very chaotic I loved how you builded up the excitment, I would love you to put another story on this blog.
Poppy C
WOW!!!!! Amazing story Mackenzie it really hooked me in. Shanaye :)
ReplyDeleteWow that was awesome mackenzie it would be so cool if you put a mother story onto blog
ReplyDeleteI would love you to put another story on the blog
ReplyDeleteI would love you to put another story on the BLOG!!!!
ReplyDeleteJemma :)