I
met Finn at the school playground I was four and he was three. I took a look he
had black hair, and blue eyes also a long rats tail down his neck. The reason
we met was because my sister met his sister and they wanted a play date. I
asked him if he wanted to play? He said “yes”. So we went off then we saw his
friend Isaac, he asked if he could play? We didn’t want to hurt his feelings
but we wanted to play by ourselves so we said yes and told him to count to ten
then we ran and hid since it was all most the school fair, the crates were
there so we hid behind those thinking he wouldn’t find. Us but he did so we
were forced to tell him but. Then our mums called so we didn’t have to I said
seeya “bye” he said. So we’ve been friends ever since.
It starts off good at the start but confusing at the middle and end.
ReplyDeleteKayla
well done Samuel it is hard to include everyone sometimes it is best to be honest! :)
ReplyDeleteRuth
I do like the way you described Finn at the start of the recount,Samuel.
ReplyDeleteJane your grandma from Motueka.